Revising my paragraph

My New Paragraph
This academic phenomenon is not limited for the use of professors. Students are finding this process a great way to express their own opinions and learn from their peers. Professors who require their students to blog are allowing their students to have a great academic discussion that allows all students to voice their opinions. It is not possible for the louder more overbearing students to overshadow the quieter students which may occur in a discussion based in a classroom setting. Blogs compliment a student's classroom education.

My Original Paragraph
Students can also use blogs to compliment their classroom education. Professors who require their students to blog are allowing their students to have a great academic discussion that allows all students to voice their opinions. It is not possible for the louder more overbearing students to overshadow the quieter students which may occur in a discussion based in a classroom setting.