End of Sentence Impact

For variation, shift the emphasis to the END of your sentences. Keep in mind that sentence organization depends on what you want to stress.  Readers typically remember the last thing you tell them.  You can also create drama and impact by placing words in specific places.

For example:

She turned red after she ate the pepper.
After she ate the pepper, she turned red.

Revise the following:

Reversed prejudice also appears in "No Speak English."
 

Refaela's husband locks her indoors on Tuesday nights.
 

First, Zlata becomes cut-off from her friends when schools have to close because of the dangers of going out into the streets.