speech review

My speech is still a long way from being finished, The problem that I seem to be having is that I am really unsure about what to talk about, and how to make strong counterpoints to my arguement from feeder 2. The part of my speech that I feel does do a good job of is the personal experiences that I have been able to see first hand, but the rest of my speech still needs work. I am unsure about how I need to get the logos and ethos of my paper to come across more effectively. The only part that I feel is sufficient is the pathos aspect of my paper. I know that I have a lot of work to do in order to get my speech to where it needs to be, and the points that I make need to become a lot stronger, and I need more qualifiers in order to make my arguement stronger.