Draft Workshop 9

1. Take a look at the author's data collection form along with his or her feeder 2.2 assignment. Does the data sheet collect all of the data necessary to prove the hypothesis? Is there any other data that could be collected to help give more convincing proof of the hypothesis? Is there any other data that could be collected that could shed further light on the hypothesis (e.g. motivations, feelings, etc.)?2. Has the author integrated research into his or her paper yet? If so, evaluate the use of research. Does it fulfill the demands of the assignment? If not, suggest ways in which the author might use research to support his or her argument.3. Is the paper divided into sections? Do the section divisions make sense? Are they elegant? Intuitive? Explain your answers.4. Based on your own research, does the author have the tone appropriate to an academic article in psychology? Why or why not? Suggest ways that the author could improve or establish his or her tone.