How my speech was perceived

Overall, I think Addison liked my speech. The part about everyone having that one inspirational teacher was especially well received because it relates to everyone. I think I need to work on being less nervous because even with only one person listening I blushed like crazy and got a little fidgety. I don't think any specific part was not well received, but I'm not sure to what extent I proved my point. I think it might help my speech to add more specific details because right now it's mostly just generalities. This could help people really relate to what I'm trying to present because they can see an example of that generality. I'm also going to have to go back and make sure I'm presenting arguments that go along with the intended audience. By talking about high school situations the freshmen in the english class could easily relate because they were there last year. Overall I should not have to make many changes to the actual speech, but a lot of practice is necessary if I want to overcome my fear of doing this speech and turning bright red...