Chris Schafer
Comm 14
Proposal/Treatment
November 19, 2002
Mark Robinson
TA: Robb Romanowski
Honor Code
We All Knew He Was The Best
Film Statement:
A documentary about a person’s life seems like old hat, as many
documentaries have been created. Documentaries can dictate different
elements of a person’s life, significant contributions that person
made to society, or tell about the person’s life in general. But,
some documentaries explain greatness, as in the case of John Flynn.
From the moment John was born, importance highlighted his face.
John Flynn’s documentary examines his birth through his childhood
and adolescent life, to adulthood. While John was growing up, it was
clear that he was the best baseball player in town. Every citizen knew
that one day John was destined to play baseball at a higher level than
anyone from the small town of Alpha, NJ, had ever played at before.
This documentary explains how John was born with a “baseball glove
on his hand.” It follows John through little league baseball and
high school baseball. The documentary shows the contributions John has
given back to his hometown, but accounts the one tragic day changing
John’s life forever.
In Flynn’s documentary, many of his friends and community members
explain how he brightens up the day of every person he is around, and
his love of the game. After viewing this documentary, it will be evident
how John Flynn made the tiny town of Alpha large.
Background and Need:
Throughout John’s life, he never took for granted his skill of
playing baseball. John knew he was the best player, but did not get
a big head. The normal “Good game John,” from the local
townsman was enough to please him.
When John was born, it was believed something special was in his genes.
John’s first word was glove, and from the time he was able to
take his first steps, he was carrying around a baseball glove. As soon
as John was old enough to sign-up for little league, his parents, Bill
and Martha, signed him up.
The locals all knew John was good, but many outside Alpha did not. The
locals targeted the people outside of town by talking about him whenever
they went to another part of the state. The common phrase when anyone
left Alpha was, “That John Flynn is the most unreal baseball player
you’ll ever see.”
The main objective of this documentary shows how John’s many accomplishments
during his playing days should not overshadow who he really is. John
is a perfect example of a person who realizes his greatness, but does
not sit on the fact he is better than others. He treats everyone as
a normal individual, as he knows everyone is created equally.
Approach, Structure, and Style:
Since this is a documentary of John Flynn’s life, interviews from
his parents, town members and former coaches and teammates, help to
tell his life story. Home videos of John when he was a baby, John playing
peewee and high school baseball, and John helping the neighbors, show
his excellence and unselfishness.
To begin the film, the narrator, Derek Michaels, his best friend, describes
John when he was a baby. He says John’s parents knew he was destined
to achieve. He interviews both Bill and Martha, and his parents say,
“It was that twinkle in his eye that made him great.” A
home video of when John spoke his first word is shown, as well as footage
of John walking around with a baseball glove in his hand.
At the first practice of the year, John’s coach, Phil Hammer,
knew John was going to be an exceptional player. As the season progressed,
the crowds grew larger with people wanting to watch John. The Alpha
Peewee team became a widely recognized team. Jacobs conducts an interview
with Hammer, and Hammer explains how John was always telling his teammates
to “Try harder. You’ll get them next time. Never give up.”
As Hammer is recounting John’s little league days, home video
will be shown of John playing, with Hammer’s voice being used
as a voice-over.
One of John’s former teammates, Ray Small, explains John’s
high school years. Small remembers how John progressed to not only the
most dominant pitcher in Alpha, but also the most dominant pitcher in
the state. When he entered high school, his coach, Jack Smith, had his
eyes set on a state title for four straight years. Over the next four
years, behind John’s strong pitching arm, that is exactly what
occurred for Alpha High School. Home video of these games will be shown,
as well as shots of the massive crowds that attended the games. Citizens
who lived as far as 100 miles away would take the drive to Alpha just
to see John pitch. His fastball had speed never before seen, and his
breaking ball dropped as if no other. Scouts from Division I colleges
and Major League Baseball Teams attended each game John pitched.
A local townsman describes John as, “Caring and always willing
to help.” As John’s popularity grew, he was never fazed.
He always displayed a helping hand around town. Whether it was mowing
a neighbor’s lawn, or instructing younger kids about baseball,
John put others above himself. Videos of John helping the elderly and
giving back to his community is shown, as interviews of neighbors and
other town members are conducted as voice-overs. John’s parents
always wanted him to attend college, so when he was offered a Major
League contract, he refused the offer.
But, this is when tragedy occurred. One night during the summer after
his senior year, John and a few of his friends were party. John and
his pals were minding their own business when two guys got in a fight.
As the fight progressed, one of the guys pulled out a gun. The gun accidentally
went off, and the bullet struck John in the shoulder of his pitching
arm. John lived, but the doctors told him that with the damage the bullet
did to his arm, he will never be able to pitch with the effectiveness
he once had. One of his friends, Mark Justice, there that night with
John, describes in an interview exactly what occurred. There is a reenactment
of the situation to show the events that transpired that night.
Of course John was devastated, but he saw this as an opportunity. He
went on to college and received his degree in Business Management. John
came back to Alpha and opened up a local sporting goods store and became
a coach for a little league team in town. At his store he sells items
any young player would need to make him a better player – bats,
gloves, shoes – and he offers advice to any individual who wants
some. The film will cut to John at his store helping out customers.
It will show him giving advice to current and future little leaguers,
as town members describe the contributions he has made to their son
or daughter. The team John coaches is one of the best in the league,
as he encourages his players to have fun and not care about winning
or losing. In his free time, John helps around the town – putting
others above himself.
The documentary concludes with an interview with John. As Michaels praises
John over and over for his greatness in baseball and contributions to
the community, John sits unfazed. He says, “I am just like anyone
else, a normal human being who is doing what I love,” as the film
ends.
Budget:
A major expense for this project will be a round trip airplane flight
from Raleigh, NC, to Allentown, PA. Upon arriving in Allentown, a rental
car will be needed. It will cost $378 on Continental Airlines for the
Raleigh to Allentown flight. A rental car from Hertz rental services
will be $19 a day, and since I will need two days in Allentown, it will
be $38 dollars to rent a car.
A hotel room at the Fairfield Inn & Suites Bethlehem will cost me
$158 for two nights. Food should cost me about $40 for two total days.
Maxell Hi8 Videotapes will cost me $9.99 for a two pack.
The other equipment needed will be checked out from the Swain Equipment
room.
There will be a contingency budget of $500. The total budget will be
$1123.99.
Shooting Schedule:
On November 30-December 2, I will write my script and decide how I am
going to collaborate the information. I will begin shooting on December
4. From December 4-6, I will shoot in Alpha, NJ, collecting interviews
from John’s parents, friends and coaches, town people and John.
I will get the videos from John’s baby years, peewee days and
high school playing. I will return to Raleigh on December 6. On December
8-10, I will compile all the data, interviews and film that I have,
and begin to edit it. I will do this until December 14. On December
15, I will release the final product.
Equipment List:
Camcorder, Hi8, #05
Battery Belt, #03
Lighting Kit, #01
Lighting Stand, “C” #01
Light Meter, #27
Sony Hi8 Digital Videotapes (2)
Tripod, #27
Microphone, #58, Wireless Lavalier (2)
Final Cut Pro
Conclusion:
This documentary tells about an incredible athlete and person. John
Flynn was an ultimate athlete who did not get a big head from success.
He continued to put others before himself, remaining at second tier.
Flynn demonstrates that not all successful athletes are rude, and that
some can have a good heart. But, if something takes your skill away
from you, you remain the same person and show no regrets.
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